Bag a Big Buck

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Forty-eight hours. Finally some time all to myself to get some well-deserved R and R. No pesky neighbors inviting me to chat over Panda tea and caviar. No tiresome Long Island Ladies Club shopping and spa outings. No puffed-up husband needing to show me off at the country club. Just me, gourmet epicurean delights, the finest imported liqueurs, and classic literature to curl up with. And firewood. Stanley promised there’d be plenty of firewood. I’ll be able to catch up on my reading, and be inspired to write my own masterpiece. Stanley’s such a sweetheart. I know he’s got a thing for me. Why else would he give me his cabin for the weekend? I’ll write a thank-you note and spritz my perfume on it. He’ll go crazy, poor thing. He was fit to be tied when I married Gaylord.

Ah, here’s the cabin. And just in time, it’s starting to snow. The cabin’s smaller than I expected. But of course, I’m used to my sprawling estate. But it’s time for Abby Gluck to buck up and experience living without modern amenities. Time to rough it. This weekend will be good for my personal growth. Both my publicist and my style consultant said I should learn new skills. So this adventure will be the subject of the brilliant book I’ll write. Oh bother, now it’s snowing and sleeting.

At least there’s a carport. I bet Stanley had one built after I asked about using his cabin last month. He knows I have a phobia of bird doo-doo on my beautiful Bentley. And I will not mar my manicure brushing snow off my windshield. Stanley really is a sweetheart. I’ll put my cherry-red lip prints on the thank-you note. He wouldn’t dare tell my husband. And perhaps I’ll give hubby a call before I get out of my Bentley. He wanted me to call him the second I arrived. Maybe the snow will let up in the meantime. It looks so chilly and icky.

Damn. No service. No bother, I’ll just use the phone in the cabin. Stanley says it’s a rotary- whatever that is- but I’m sure I can figure it out.

Okay, here goes nothing. Surely I can fit my four bags on my pull cart. I don’t want to make two trips to the door in this nasty weather. I’ll have to start a fire ASAP to dry my suede coat, and – oh poo! My high heels are sinking into the ground! Will I even make it to the cabin? Double poo! Mud all over my heels. Some relaxing weekend this is turning out to be. Ah, there’s a note on the door.

“Dearest Abigail,

I hope you find the cabin to your satisfaction and that you have a restful weekend. Please help yourself to the fridge and liquor cabinet. There’s a power generator in the closet, but I’ve only had to use it once, during the blizzard of ’96. Call me if you need anything at all. My number is by the phone, and the key is under the doormat.

Yours truly,


Ha! What a flirt he is. Maybe I should call him just to give him a thrill. I’ll tell him I need a swizzle stick for my cocktail. But first, I need that key. Why on earth would he put it under the mat? He knows I have a phobia of creepy-crawlies. If I could just find a clean-looking stick, I could lift the mat and scoot out the key. No sticks near the door, and now I’m starting to freeze my fanny off. I’ll just have to use my heel- these shoes are ruined anyway. But if I see one of those giant centipedes, they’ll find me frozen on these steps, passed out from fright.

Hallelujah, no bugs. And the mat and the key are clean. Stanley always keeps things squeaky clean, I’ll give him credit for that. Now to flip the wall switch and peek inside. I will not have any spiders jump out at me. I’ll unstrap my bags here, and leave my pull cart and shoes outside. A Long Island Gluck does not track mud all over the floor.

Is that the phone ringing? Must be Stanley. Or Gaylord. Oh poo! My fingers are numb from the cold. I can’t get the prong out on my shoe buckle. This is the last time I buy Louboutins!

“Don’t hang up, don’t hang up, don’t hang up!”

Get off, damn shoe! Final-



My head.

The phone.

“Hello?.. What? Who is this?.. Can you hear me?.. Hello?”

Damn rotary. I’d swear on a stack of Neiman Marcus Christmas Books I heard some guy say, ‘I know it ain’t legal, but I’m gonna bang Abby Gluck tonight.’ And some other guy said, ‘I’m gonna bang Abby Gluck tonight too.’ I knew I had stalker trolls. But I didn’t think they’d stalk me here. They’re probably lurking outside right now. If that new girl Donacella talked to the press, I’ll have her deported!

But I’ll deal with her later. I’ve hit my head, and my ankle. And I bet this suede coat is as ruined as the Louboutins. If I can just kick the door shut with my other leg- there!

Now, what have I learned?

I’ve learned a Long Island Gluck is not suited for roughing it.

I’ll call 911.

“Hello? 911? This is Abigail Gluck, and I’m staying at Stanley Wicker’s cabin in Vermont. I don’t remember the address, I hit my head. But you can trace this call. Stanley Wicker of Long Island. He has a cabin in Vermont… Yes, this is an emergency! A couple sex-crazed forest trolls said they’re gonna bang me- Abigail Gluck! Perhaps you’ve heard of me?.. Yes? No? My husband is Gaylord Gluck. We’re the Long Island Glucks… Yes? No? I demand to speak to your supervisor… You are a public servant, and I’m giving you an order. I’m about to be banged by a couple of lurking nocturnal trolls! Is your supervisor available?.. Listen, I’ll have you know my husband pays your salary, and I- hello? Hello?”

Damn rotary.

I’ll call Gaylord.

“Hello, Donacella? This is your employer, Abigail Gluck, do you understand?.. Yes? No? My husband is Gaylord Gluck, and you’re our maid… Have I reached the Long Island Gluck estate?.. Can you tell me where you are? Yes? No? Can you speak English?.. I’m asking you a question. Hablar Inglés?.. Listen, I’ll have you know my husband pays your salary, and I- hello? Hello?”

Damn rotary.

I’ll call Stanley.

Oh poo! I can’t reach the number on the table with my ankle all bruised. I’ll call 411.

“Hello? Information? Yes, I’m trying to reach Stanley Wicker of Long Island… Yes, I know his number is unlisted, but I’m a close, personal friend of his. I’m Abigail Gluck, perhaps you’ve heard of me?.. Yes? No? My husband is Gaylord Gluck. We’re the Long Island Glucks… Yes? No? Are you from this country?.. I’m asking you a question- are you from this country?.. Listen, I’ll have you know my husband pays your salary, and I- hello? Hello?”

Damn rotary.

Poo. Forty-eight hours. All by myself at an address I don’t even remember. No neighbors. No ladies. No husband. Just me, food, liquor, and books. And firewood. Stanley promised there’d be plenty of firewood.

At least I remember my Cotillion Scouts training. I’ll start a fire. A big one. Big enough to ward off the sex-crazed nocturnal trolls.

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Thanks to Joyce Juzwik of Flash Fiction Friday for this flash fiction prompt!

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  1. “Bag a big buck” – LOL! Good one.

    And you wrote Abigail so well, I just wanted to slap her. 🙂

  2. I can just see it – sex-crazed troll comes on to her and she starts asking “can you speak English? Are you from this country?” I’m sure she’d let anyone bang the buck as long as they said they’d heard of her famous family.
    Delightful character. I want to know more about poor Stanley too. Does he finally snap?

    • LOL Thanks! I’ve decided the Glucks and poor Stanley are going to get the full-length novel treatment. 🙂 Onto the back burner they go. (Abby is by now used to the burning sensation.)

  3. ‘The Long Island Glucks…’ – there’s a whole backstory awaiting in those few words! ;-p

    Loved her attitude – one of those characters you laugh ‘at’, not ‘with’!

    (mind you – I’m still chuckling at her husband’s name – Gaylord Gluck – I bet he’s a chinless wonder!)

    • Yep, writing the backstory will be fun. And I may have to borrow “chinless wonder.” Stanley to Abby: “You married Gaylord Gluck, the chinless wonder?!” LOL

  4. Oh, I so want to bitch-slap Abigail! Lol!!

    I love the progression of the phone calls… the narrative voice here is simply brilliant, CM!

    • Abby is “fun,” though isn’t she? 😉 A famous spoiled rich Paris-ite was partially the inspiration for her character. Thank you for your high praise!

      • Oh, she is that! “The Long Island Glucks? Yes? No?” I swear, I could hear her voice perfectly! Lol!!

        This was probably one of the most fun reads I seen all week… and I’ve been reading a lot! I got the sense that you were having a lot of fun writing this one. 🙂

  5. Oh our little Abby never gives up, does she? What a delightfully vile character she is. Better than everyone else, married better than everyone else, and her poor shoes… Kind of makes you want to root for the stalkers. Although, I’m willing to bet if they did break in, she’d remind them her husband pays their salary! This is so great, and I, too, would love not only some backstory about her life with Gaylord (priceless name), but of course, what actually occurs at the cabin. Superbly done!

    • Thank you for your kind comments! Poor little rich Abby would indeed remind the “stalkers” where their paychecks come from.

      The next morning, Stanley and Gaylord show up at the cabin, worried sick because their precious Abby had the rotary off the hook all night. They find their dear Abby asleep on the floor, the lamp and the window broken, thanks to Abby’s flung Louboutins. The remains of a bag of liquour-filled bonbons- a gift from Gaylord- is strewn over the doormat, having fallen from Abby’s pull cart. And a couple of lurking nocturnal raccoons are sleeping off last night’s bender under Abby’s Bentley.

      Meanwhile, a couple big buck hunters in the next county are paying their fines for hunting the previous night. They were caught before they got to “bag a big buck.” 🙂

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