Hello?- a Microfiction Challenge

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Hello?

Daddy?

Is that you?

I know it’s you.

I see your light.

I feel your warmth.

I promise to be good.

All night I prayed.

Now I love you with all my heart and trust you with all my soul, just like you told me to.

Please unlock the door this time?

Hello?

Daddy?

*

Thanks to Jezri’s Nightmares for this microfiction challenge!

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6 Comments

  1. Damn!

    I like! (In that chilling way.)

    Reply
  2. Okay, now I’m creeped out. Well done.

    Reply
  3. Excellent! Sad… but so good!

    Reply

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