A Murder in Time / Spellbound (books 54 and 55)

A Murder in Time / Jonas Saul

Synopsis – Marcus is a guy who thinks he has little to lose. In his 20s, he knows he will develop early onset Alzheimer’s disease in a few years. His mother is dead, and his father is a broken-down alcoholic. He works for low pay in an adult toy store. So he figures he’s gotta grab that brass ring one way or another before his lucid time runs out. But when Marcus robs the toy store, his plan doesn’t go off without a hitch or three. He doesn’t factor in that actions have consequences. Enter the secret weapon – Marcus discovers he can travel backward in time to “fix” his actions. But each “fix” leads to another consequence, and the consequences quickly become unbearable…

Reaction – Smooth, fluid writing, but the storyline gets more confused as the novel progresses. Granted, it’s a paradoxical time travel book, but at the end I was wondering if Marcus was already displaying Alzheimer’s symptoms. Marcus inexplicably seeks help from a therapist he knows has been drugging and raping him for years. That bothered me. He also keeps making little jumps back in time to prevent little mistakes, instead of jumping back to prevent the big mistake which started the whole mess. That also bothered me. High suspense, and I really rooted for the guy, even though he was an idiot.

Recommendation – You’re taking your chances with this hit and miss book.

Get it here – http://www.amazon.com/Murder-Time-Novel-Jonas-Saul-ebook/dp/B00GJ2IHAS

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Spellbound / Tim Kizer

Synopsis – What if you drive to some podunk town, check into a motel, and within a few days, start meeting people who say you’ve been there for months? What if you start to believe them? After all, these people seem friendly and honest. Heck, the whole town is downright likeable. And the motel itself – you wouldn’t mind calling it “home.” Come to think of it, that’s just what you’re gonna do. Be a permanent guest. Just like all the other guests at the motel. Never mind about your spouse and job left back in your former hometown. Mind control or demonic possession – who cares, as long as you and your new friends are happy.

Reaction – The first half of this book was staccato and flat. The characters were dull and the action was monotonous. But still, the writing had a nice dream-like quality, and I gradually found myself getting into the zombie-like rhythm. The second half of the book got more active and exciting. The spouse of the main character concocted all kinds of craziness to try to break the motel’s spell, which made for humorous reading. The repeated “penis” and “erection” references, however, only seemed to add to the odd one-dimensionality. Then the end was a true WTF moment. The storyline “resolved” itself without real explanation, unless you count an oh-so-brief non sequitur thrown into the last paragraph.

Recommendation – You’re taking your chances with this hit and miss book.

Get it here – http://www.amazon.com/Spellbound—Suspense-Novel-Tim-Kizer-ebook/dp/B00KN9FHS8

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